 Secrets Of Burr Creek, An Original Story |
 Aug 1 2005, 01:00 PM
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 Donovan's Dame  Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14  |
Here is my newest story. My first original story so I really hope I get reviews on this one. I'm really proud of it. It is set in the old west, so if you like westerns you'll enjoy this one. As if I had to say this; Oded was my inspiration for the lead.
Summary: Sheriff Ben Talbot has fallen in love with the town Madame. When her best friend's husband is killed Ben starts to learn more about his lady and other citizens of Burr Creek. Secrets of Burr Creek Chapter 1 Here is the cover I made for it! 
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Aug 1 2005, 01:42 PM
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 Antoine's Angel Group: Members Posts: 610 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Jonesboro, AR Member No.: 18 |
Good start so far, Mary Ann. I can tell you're gonna put these two through nine kinds of Hades!
--------------------  "Perhaps explanations are best kept for later..." Oded as Ardeth Bay, The Mummy Returns. "Brendan who?" ---My reaction after seeing Oded in The Mummy. |
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Aug 1 2005, 07:26 PM
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Left ya a note at your place, but adding here that I'm looking forward to finding out Bell's secrets! Yee haw!
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Sep 5 2005, 12:59 AM
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 Farik's Fancy Group: Members Posts: 136 Joined: 7-July 05 From: Czech Republic Member No.: 97 |
Iīm looking forward to finding out Bellīs secret too. I canīt imagine WHAT secret it will be.
 Amazing story
-------------------- "I have a great imaginary world, but sometimes I just need things to happen."
"I live my life as one big Christmas Eve, and it makes me happy, happy, happy!" **Godīs a woman too** |
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| Dreamy |
Sep 24 2005, 01:23 PM
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MaryAnn...I thought you had put up the second chapter???
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Sep 25 2005, 08:46 PM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
Oops I did mean too, but when I came here to put it up I changed the link at the top to the new site and forgot to post the new chapter. DUH!!! So hear it is.
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Oct 1 2005, 09:13 PM
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Antoine's Angel Group: Members Posts: 610 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Jonesboro, AR Member No.: 18 |
Anothah great chapter, Mary Ann. Oh, what web of drama are you weaving, woman????
-------------------- "Perhaps explanations are best kept for later..." Oded as Ardeth Bay, The Mummy Returns. "Brendan who?" ---My reaction after seeing Oded in The Mummy. |
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Oct 2 2005, 08:35 AM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
Thank ya, Ma'am. I do love creating problems. LOL I have chapter 3 up now too!
Chapter 3 This post has been edited by Shadowchaser40: May 4 2007, 10:29 PM -------------------- |
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Oct 2 2005, 11:05 AM
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MaryAnn's on a roll! I think she's intending a lot of heartache for us and her characters. Good job, Lady
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Oct 2 2005, 01:18 PM
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Antoine's Angel Group: Members Posts: 610 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Jonesboro, AR Member No.: 18 |
No doubt...and I ask again, Ms. Mary Ann, what are you deeewing to us???? Huh?
-------------------- "Perhaps explanations are best kept for later..." Oded as Ardeth Bay, The Mummy Returns. "Brendan who?" ---My reaction after seeing Oded in The Mummy. |
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Oct 2 2005, 09:56 PM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
I like my readers to feel the suffereing. Now you will suffer cause I don't have the next chapter ready and i don't know when I'll have time to do it.
 I'm working 4 days a week now. I will try to get the next one up in a week or two.
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Nov 8 2005, 04:41 AM
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Farik's Fancy Group: Members Posts: 136 Joined: 7-July 05 From: Czech Republic Member No.: 97 |
Mary Ann
very nice story
-------------------- "I have a great imaginary world, but sometimes I just need things to happen."
"I live my life as one big Christmas Eve, and it makes me happy, happy, happy!" **Godīs a woman too** |
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Jan 3 2006, 10:04 PM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
I have chapters 4 and 5 up now.
Chapter 4 Chapter 5 -------------------- |
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Jan 4 2006, 01:14 AM
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Farik's Fancy Group: Members Posts: 136 Joined: 7-July 05 From: Czech Republic Member No.: 97 |
Very very nice, Mary Ann.
These chapters are so romantic! 
-------------------- "I have a great imaginary world, but sometimes I just need things to happen."
"I live my life as one big Christmas Eve, and it makes me happy, happy, happy!" **Godīs a woman too** |
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 Apr 19 2006, 10:06 AM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
I have the next chapter up now. Sorry it took so long, but I think it's worth the wait. Don't forget to leave a review.
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Apr 30 2006, 10:04 AM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
I have chapter 7 up now.
I think you will be a little surprised by this one. Secrets of Burr Creek 7 -------------------- |
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Jul 10 2006, 08:30 AM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
Chapter 8 is up. Its been up for a while I just forgot to post the link.
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Jul 10 2006, 07:16 PM
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MaryAnn, just in case I haven't told you lately, I think you're doing a great job w/ this story. Keep it up!
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Jul 24 2006, 08:11 AM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
I have chapter 9 ready. Thanks for the compliment Dreamy.
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May 4 2007, 10:32 PM
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Donovan's Dame Group: Members Posts: 383 Joined: 18-August 03 From: Indiana Member No.: 14 |
As you might tell I have deleted the links for this story. It is for a good reason. I am going to have it published!!!!
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